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This is great. So many interesting pictures. Robotic yet squirmy and fleshy... I like this. It feels like the future.

I like the first stanza, there is a flow to it that's kind of weird and magical. I think the sentiment of being in battle with yourself is universal, and ...

this is pretty awesome. has a very organic emotional flow, if that makes any sense. great work!

Preach to their friends of how you life the lid on life, death and everything in the mid(dle). this part didn't really make sense to me. this is pretty straightforward, ...

shame on you for using dickinson, too.

maybe there's an audience for this kind of poetry, but this really didn't speak to me in any way. it seems needlessly wordy without anything substantive or poetic to say. ...

No one can match the way her breasts move en sposina with each breath she takes as she sings sweetly on silver. this is pretty generic, pretty predictable. lots of ...

I like this as you can feel the emotion really well- however this just seems to be a random poem with no many ideas expanded upon. If you expanded upon ...

Poetry is not having every couple of words spaced like this. In fact this is annoying to read and there's really no poetry involved. No, seriously, line breaks are not ...

How could she laugh if her throat was cut? Never mind. Forget I asked. This seemed more like a Cannibal Corpse song than an emo poem. Sickening to read, but ...

She touched the dead body. In pale throes of silent decay, it waited. How ridiculous, she cried out, how artificial, this bag of purple intestines-- I should produce something finer, ...

this reads amazing and true. you deserve a hundred comments. i love sylvia woolf :)

aw, you guys are nice :)

why do people look for "order" in poetry? it boggles the mind. like others have said, the flow is beautiful. i didn't find the content thrilling, but when the words ...

you have a refreshing perspective on these things. our young celebrity obsession has reached depressing heights.